
Numbers are an important part of storytelling for my sector, the built environment, and B2B businesses more widely, but how you present data within your writing is critical.
Strategic presentation of numbers can enhance clarity and support the story; poor presentation can confuse and lessen the impact.
Here are 5 things to consider when including numbers and data in your copy:
1. Number order
Let the order of the numbers support the story.
Talking about growth? Write from X (smaller number) to Y (bigger number):
❌ Office rents have grown to £105 from £100
✔️ Office rents have grown from £100 to £105
Similarly, when talking about a reduction/decrease, write from X (bigger number) to Y (smaller number):
❌ Vacancy has decreased to 5% from 7% in the last year.
✔️ Vacancy has decreased from 7% to 5% in the last year.
2. Absolute numbers vs percentages
Choose whether to include the absolute number or a percentage based on the emotional impact of the point you are making.
Absolute numbers give a tangible scale:
We’ve added 378 apartments to our rental portfolio in the last 6 months.
Percentages can be used to indicate momentum or trend, particularly when the absolute numbers are small.
We’ve increased our portfolio of rental apartments by 8%.
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