
Mistake: Poor or cryptic headlines
Your headlines (or opening lines on a LinkedIn post) are the most important words you’ll write.
They need to tell and sell to your target audience: Tell people what they will get if they read on, and make them want to read on.
Look at a headline in isolation. No image or other text, just the headline. Does it make sense on its own?
Be wary of play on words, puns and other cleverness that potentially obscure the meaning.
Those clever punny print tabloid and magazine headlines are often rewritten for the online version because they don’t work on a crowded home page.
It is better to be clear and include keywords.
Look at your headline objectively. Is it focused on what is likely to pique your target audience’s interest or something you find interesting?
If another business wrote it, would you click on that story, article or case study?
Every word of your headline needs to earn its space.
Mistake: Trying to say too much
You get on a roll with writing your article, and it becomes a case of ‘and another thing’. I’ve been there, and it’s fine if you are a prudent editor.
Trying to cover too many different things risks diluting your point and leaving your audience confused. Focused content leaves the readers in no doubt of the point you are making.
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